Probably been answered plenty but I didn't see this question down the list.
If I upload a new, better edited version of my game story, will I lose the reviews and comments it has?
I wrote my game without looking back much and I feel its pretty good aside from the errors I'm seeing now that I read back over it.

If you update it, no...
The game ID is what the system tracks to tell if this is an update, or a new program.

The comments will stay with your game, even for the update.
You can even change the revision number without loosing anything.

Thanks for the answer! Then I will get to editing my game, hit update, and upload the revised version.