Hello everybody

I especially address those who know the Italian language. I have recently started developing a sci-fi adventure in Italian.
I am still far from finishing it but since it is the first for me I would like to have feedback of any kind.
Adventure is http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/c5zan_iui0qexwdraat68q/il-mondo-dei-robot-working-in-progress

Best regards.
Luca Lissandrello