Despite being very short and buggy it is playable.

I'd like your opinions on it, criticism or even some scripting tricks I could use for my other quest games.
It is 18+ and it does relate to fat fetish.
game: http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/89uqruzrtkeh5oej6ccbvq/adalines-story

I recommend you play it in the Quest application as the site has a bad habit of freezing up.

From Uplink (DizzOk)