Suggestion and Feedback, Please? (2nd DEMO)

Y4T5UR0
21 Dec 2019, 10:47So I just updated my game and released the 2nd DEMO of my game: Hidden Fractures
I planned to upload the 1st DEMO on my recently-made blog though (y4t5ur0.blogspot.com), to show the differences for anyone who would like to.
Anyway, the link:
http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/ox0tb2korkkyobufgjb7dq/hidden-fractures-2nd-demo-updated
I have to admit, there are some features that I planned to have implemented by the 2nd DEMO but then I didn't get to...
Please give any suggestion or feedback, though this game isn't completed yet >_<
I've been really impatient to release a second demo, so I'm open to any suggestions to improve my game!
Thanks!~~~

Io
22 Dec 2019, 03:44Aye aye!
jmnevil54
22 Dec 2019, 22:52Cool. I defeated the wolf. I thought with my damage output, I would die. But I won!

Y4T5UR0
23 Dec 2019, 12:58Cool. I defeated the wolf. I thought with my damage output, I would die. But I won!
Yippie!! :D
I'm happy for ya'!